Here’s my splined pass of this dialogue shot. Today was my self-imposed deadline to get this pass done. My next one will be to polish the shot and tighten everything up, smooth out arcs, etc. I’m going to take a break from this shot and clear my head of it, so my next pass for this shot will probably be a week or so down the road. I’ll start planning out a new one in the meantime, probably one with a more dramatic delivery.
Please feel free to share any feedback you might have. 
Notes to myself:
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finesse hands/fingers
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tighten dialogue, push mouth shapes
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animate tongue
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watch elbows
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offset facial controllers more, tighten eyebrows
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add eye-dart around 288 and 328
Keep up the good work dude! The girls are downstairs opening up their gifts, and I’m stuck on the computer!
It’s coming along well. I agree with some of your notes especially pushing some of the mouth shapes. It may help punctuate some of her movements or set-up some.
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