The Pursuit of Character

1. b.sueyoshi Said,

   hey freddy…just watched your blocking. awesome! makes me want to do a new short too! great job!

   just a few ideas when i watched it.

   77 when stewie grabs the jem, slow that down a little and have the guard glance back while he’s doing it, so he sees him. (sorta like a “caught in the act” moment)

   154 i wouldn’t have the guard come back into this pose…it feels too casual. i think you could keep him in the ready/surprised pose (128) as stewie runs past the window.

   202 when he turns the corner, the force doesn’t feel like enough. maybe you could have him slide (toward camera) a little as he’s turning?

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